first of all i really like the title. i mean this in the best way. its almost humorous in its light and airy feel if that makes sense. very open to interpretation. it gives a very clear message through the simple using of switching where the micro would go with the macro . it goes from rain drop to drop is rain. i think thats very clever.

The flow of this is so pleasant. I love the simplicity and how effortlessly it rolls together. My favorite line is definitely “being is human.” I appreciate the duality of the play on words that mirror your other lines while it also is a double entendre that really encapsulates the poem’s take away as a whole, for me. Very lovely!

Thank you for posting.    




Ah. E pluribus unum.



    Quickie feedback     


- There's not much to provide in consideration of feedback due to the brief nature of this piece. So, sticking with content:    


- Four lines that posit a very abstract outcome. What is meant by "many is one"? Could be anything. Could be a form, perhaps present here on concept that any finite object or entity is comprised of a varying degree of parts, but that is me staring into a well. 


- "being is human", I don't agree with this. Being is not exclusive to human beings. What about animals? Single cell organisms? Must we be so full of ourselves to ignore the being happening outside of ourselves?     



Again, thank you for posting.

I kinda like it. I like the way that it's written, but the "We're all one," concept is such a cliché for me, and a false one, at that! Other than that though, I like it. Very provocative style! 😊


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I don't know what this means but I like it. I don't know why I like it but I do.

drop is rain  
ray is sun  
being is human  
many is one  
  
  
  
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