Love of My Life

This is actually a song I wrote years ago.. Please feel free to comment on what you guys think about my creation so I can improve. Thank you.

The snow starts to fall like teardrops in my eyes Our favorite song playin as I walk down the aisle Memories' flashin back moments of love Never imagined the day has come When God would make us one

Closer each step I make my heart go beating Faster and racing, your smile is all I can see You hold my hand, oh you complete me Never imagined the day has come When God would make us one

Now here we stand face to face Fulfilling ev'ry promises we've made Together we made it through Just me and you, and forevermore

Kisses of love, breath of life Under the stars and moon 'tis perfect night There's no more waiting, no more to hide Never imagined the day has come When God would make us one

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