I need help deciding on a name for my poem!! I haven’t written in years and this is just a rough draft so don’t judge plsss

Workshop

I was your disposable camera

You carried me in your pocket

And filled me with sweet summer memories

But with every blurry sunset

I mourned our love

And with every candid smile

I grieved what we could have had

I knew I was temporary all along

But with each captured moment

I hoped I was wrong

Then August came

So did my time

And our perfect love story

Was left in July

I watched as you jumped

Into piles of leaves

And took countless pictures

Of cadmium trees

As you admired your breath

In the harsh winter air

And danced around with

Snowflakes in your hair

I was reminded

That you never cared

And as you fell in love

With the colors of spring

I replayed the memories

Of our summer fling

Now I sit here

Alone and untouched

Wishing you would just

Use me again

Because though our disposable love

Could never last

It was better than the torture

Of our beautiful past

I am a roll of film

You never developed

Twenty seven echos

Of our happiest rhymes

So now as you admire the beauty

Of the passage of time

I remain paralyzed

Frozen in July

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