I need help deciding on a name for my poem!! I haven’t written in years and this is just a rough draft so don’t judge plsss
I was your disposable camera
You carried me in your pocket
And filled me with sweet summer memories
But with every blurry sunset
I mourned our love
And with every candid smile
I grieved what we could have had
I knew I was temporary all along
But with each captured moment
I hoped I was wrong
Then August came
So did my time
And our perfect love story
Was left in July
I watched as you jumped
Into piles of leaves
And took countless pictures
Of cadmium trees
As you admired your breath
In the harsh winter air
And danced around with
Snowflakes in your hair
I was reminded
That you never cared
And as you fell in love
With the colors of spring
I replayed the memories
Of our summer fling
Now I sit here
Alone and untouched
Wishing you would just
Use me again
Because though our disposable love
Could never last
It was better than the torture
Of our beautiful past
I am a roll of film
You never developed
Twenty seven echos
Of our happiest rhymes
So now as you admire the beauty
Of the passage of time
I remain paralyzed
Frozen in July
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Posted Aug 22, 2022, 7:39 AM UTC