I really love this. It's thought provoking on who's subjectivity we should value most, especially for something as ephemeral and capricious as beauty stands


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Still adding to this, one of the first things I’ve ever written

Thats pretty impressive, especially for a first time. Great work

Magic mirror on the wall,
Who’s the fairest of them all. 
Who’s vanity paves the way for your existence.
The one which whom you adore with minimal resistance. 

When we realise that beauty is subjective, 
We know that this mirror’s adoration will be different than the next is. 
Without distain, regret or creating second guesses. 
When you get rid of beauty, the heart is all your left with. 

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Magic Mirror - A Fairytale Lie