Chapter 1 -- A Phantom Signal [3270]

Hey, looking for any and all feedback. But mostly looking for flow, pacing, and if Catch's motivation comes across as wanting to recover the S.O.S. signal or finding the Omega Throne more. And if you feel they are related, they are. So if that comes across too, let me know.

Thanks and enjoy!

[A Phantom Signal] https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AqbyylSUXuoylYi0hNBz96a6h4d4evF3xh7FM0LHn9k/edit?usp=sharing

Critiques:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/wu48wn/978_ronno/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3 [978 (really 1200)]

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/w0rnuf/3345_scifi_giant_mecha_battles/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web2x&context=3 [3345]