[3,345] SCIFI GIANT MECHA BATTLES

Hi, this a science fiction story that I'm working on. It is about humans who have conquered the solar system, and an exploration into the nature of desire.

Specific feedback include:

--were the characters compelling? Were they likeable, have depth, make you want to read on? Or was it the opposite?

--was the world building adequate enough to set you as a reader into this time and place?

--how was the imagery? The prose?

--could you catch any reoccurring themes, or possible themes?

--could you imagine this type of writing working for future giant mecha fights?

--would you continue on had there been more text? Haha🤔

Thanks a bunch for reading! I appreciate it

Submission: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dqMeFiv3gYOmDNlmjLqSDh5sCqYL-Il_TR00XtjXOs8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Critiques: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vz9gy7/1180_a_wrinkled_year/igauidm?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vyhiam/1071_a_brief_respite/igc7t54?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share&context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/vy0gh9/2209_the_alchemist_chapter_one_fantasy_alzheimers/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/w066eb/1834_the_mall_dystopian_nearfuture/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/w0ku8o/1953_crimson_queen_v2/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share