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Thank you so much for your reply. Means a lot to me. More than you know

I’m so sorry for your loss. I can feel your love for him so powerfully through your words and I can feel the emotion you have to be with him again. You definitely prove in this piece that love is indeed never ending. ❤️

I could spend infinite forevers with you,
In a perpetual time loop,
Eons;
To just start anew.
Dancing in quantum ripples,
To a tune of a song sung by the stars themselves.
I would paint my soul with the colors of you,
And breathe of your essence.
For there will always only ever be,
You and I.
There is a fortress which guards that place,
The castle upon which you will always be,
The only king. 





(I'm misusing "you and i" aren't I? It should be "you and me", correct? I just noticed this as I was writing this out here.) Also context, I lost the love of my life to epilepsy. I wrote this about him. His soul was poetry!!! Thanks for reading. 


1. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/x153wx/dear_past_present_future_lover/imf04xc?utm_medium=android_app&amp;utm_source=share&amp;context=3

2. https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/comments/x1h1qu/fractals/imezhoh?utm_medium=android_app&amp;utm_source=share&amp;context=3