Thanks so much. I don't know why I had line breaks but they disappeared once posted.

I did. Hope it won't happen again next time. Thanks for reading!

I can see where you were going here and the idea is good but I think if you add line breaks it would make the flow much easier. Maybe you did and reddit messed up the formatting?


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Songs breathe through melodies
Poems. Rhymes.
Misfortune. Tragedies.
Memories. Time.
Such sweet seeds of love
You planted in charm
Leaving me afloat
Craving your warmth.



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