Head To Toe

Oh weary heart

That beat so true

I’d not be here if it weren’t for you

You sang a song that rang so sweet

And left me doubtless, our love was concrete

Oh weary feet

That ran to the fire

Your scolded soles a victim of desire

You ran your knees into the ground

To keep that love, concrete, around

Oh weary brain

That whispered me truths

Instead of the lies I wanted in sooth

You uttered ‘It’s over’ and I had to accept

That for my heart and my feet, it was time to rest.

This is my first attempt at rhyming poetry so apologies if it seems somewhat contrived!

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