Suffering

Poem

Silently Suffering while Sitting in Solitude with no Sight of a Savior

Unanimous Unattainable craving for Universal Understanding Uniquely United

Forgetful faith, Feeling Fearful about the Feasible Forgotten Fate

Frustratingly Fighting For the Fast Falling Feather of Failure, Feeling Forgotten

Eradication of Enjoyable Encounters, Evidence of the inEvitable End Extincts any Ecstatic Emotions

Rest Rarely Reachable with Radical Rapid Recession of Rational Reason, Reform Reduced to Regret with Redundant Remarks Repeated by Religion

Illusion of Innocence Infected by Intellect, Independent Improvement Is Instigated by Immoral Impulses

Nihilistic kNowledge, Not kNowing the Natural Need of Nature. Nearing Neverland Nobody kNows what's Next

Genuine Gentlemen Genocided by God and Gold, Greed Gripping the Green Globe like Gravity Gradually Grabbing the Giant Granite Grave of those Gone.

Suffering Unites Family Friends, Everlasting Remembrance In Nature's Grasp

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(Each line is designated to each letter in the word 'suffering'. First time trying it, would love some feedback)

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