ILikeToCreate

u/ILikeToCreate







r/AmateurWriting•

Sharp and dull

The cold air contrasted

The walls grey

My body retracted

My knees tightly held by my arms

Strong. Cold. Alert.

Smells flirt with death

My body retracted

The opposite, in fact, impacted

My thoughts cold.

Strong. Alert.

Metal scraping stone and screeching from the torture

Was fuel for my fire, stimulation for this creature

Hesitation insisted I stay still

But the numb-less pervasion of my starvation for stimulation beckoned all four fours forward

And I leaped

No longer human

An animal

Abnormal

Experienced and almost tribal

Teeth piercing with grace

A red necklace to lace my neck

Haste Haste

And then nothing.

And then reality.

And then everything.

The

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r/OCPoetry•

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Sharp and dull

The cold air contrasted

The walls grey

My body retracted

My knees tightly held by my arms

Strong. Cold. Alert.

Smells flirt with death

My body retracted

The opposite, in fact, impacted

My thoughts cold.

Strong. Alert.

Metal scraping stone and screeching from the torture

Was fuel for my fire, stimulation for this creature

Hesitation insisted I stay still

But the numb-less pervasion of my starvation for stimulation beckoned all four fours forward

And I leaped

No longer human

An animal

Abnormal

Experienced and almost tribal

Teeth piercing with grace

A red necklace to lace my neck

Haste Haste

And then nothing.

And then reality.

And then everything.

Th

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r/AskReddit•

I like to write, compose music, draw, you name it. I am looking for subreddits that I can post my work in and get some supportive feedback (aka subreddits with good communities). Any media is good as I am interested in all, thanks! [serious]

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