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JUDITH'S JOURNEY by u/Lawant - After losing her son and husband in a traffic accident, Judith goes to find the one responsible, but she's not prepared for how deep the mystery goes. (103 pages) https://www.dropbox.com/s/171z6tsrxf0jaa9/JudithsJourneyDraft3_English.pdf?dl=0
COUNTRYMEN by u/totallynotjmh - Set in the mythical American West, a tavern keeper faces an impossible choice. (91 pages) https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h5ne8_REyHARzOnCX1vxXDxGMRAPYN27/view
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DRUNK OFF LOVE by u/FuzzyWuzzyKorean
Logline: A wannabe screenwriter attempts to forget his juvenile break up with the volatile mixture of alcohol, modern dating, and his imaginary friend Bruce Lee.
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1-JAiY_oAFrQPzY3x9P2rdwb_PrmaoG5L/view
AN GORTA MOR by u/ev31yn
Logline: When the Great Famine hits 1840s Ireland, a young family fights to stay together - and alive.
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1sjqmp455OXY2J6QxXH4CY8NycZk-J_my/view
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Animated comedy.
Would love to swap scripts if you're into it.
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(The title is temporary until I find a better one) I have a 27 page draft written. There are things I know I want to tweak, but I’m interested in any general feedback on the document I have!! PM me and I’ll send you a copy/give feedback on one of your pieces. Thanks!
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Written by u/stratofarius
Logline: A cynical actress desperate for money joins the strange crew of a movie studio tour (Sitcom, 37pgs).
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Oictd_4usCNlYGR1UzKAk2J5qazoRJRA/view
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Hey guys I just completed a new draft for the script based on all the helpful feedback i got on this subreddit. Looking forward to start trading again.
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Genre is drama/thriller. Would really appreciate some in-depth notes on this as I'm looking to make the script a lot stronger. Let me know!
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A network for writers to exchange screenplays for feedback.
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I'll read anything from features to shorts to pilots and offer thorough feedback. Anyone who's done this with me before can probably vouch for my quick turnarounds.
I'd prefer that you PM me rather than leave a comment.
UPDATE: Still have room for a few more swaps.
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