[2965] Love is Dead

Opening chapter of my smutty paranormal romance. Although, there's no smut in the first chapter, if you're concerned about that kind of thing. Paranormal is also a new genre for me.

[2965[ LOVE IS DEAD

Hopefully, my crits are up to the standard:

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14cvldf/1464_the_edge_of_the_aunnan/jory0mk/?context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/149f0dy/1846_sector_l7/jo95qxz/?context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/149xgvl/1970_sophia_and_the_colour_weavers_middlegrade/jo8nutm/?context=3

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/14a1oad/1115_turn_the_waste_of_space_into_ash/jo8jffx/?context=3