[2396] Fake Smiles and Bullock's Detective Agency

EDIT: I've locked my google docs while I rework it. Thanks to everyone who commented!

Hi!

This is the first time I've ever shared my work online. I'm very excited about this piece. It began as a short story, but it's already 2k words and I've just begun to scratch the surface. I'm wondering if I should expand it into a book.

I'm looking to get feedback to see what level my writing is at. I'm proud of what I've done. I think it's good, but I still need other's to show me what I can do better.

This piece is just an introduction to the character and the inciting incident that causes her life to change dramatically. There's much more story to this, I promise!

I've marked it NSFW due to language and references of sex.

Thanks for reading in advance!

Link to story

Critiques:

[1798] Plague Doctor

[1481] It Gets Worse

[2380] Saving this for Last

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