[2432] A Cat’s Offering

Hi all! I have a short story from the point of view of a cat to share with you all. I paid for an editor but the suggested changes were so bad I think they took my money and ran. I’d be glad to hear anything this sub has to say!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18UcLNplyaS6Tps2mBiEsnEIsDEqwRxGLjUe9sqQSqUY/edit

My crits:

[225] Of Strange Matters

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1878qlp/225_of_strange_matters/

[2486] Pearl of the Orient

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/187sax5/2486_pearl_of_the_orient_book_i_chapter_i/

[1405] The Fourteenth Streeters

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/18834up/1405_the_fourteenth_streeters/

[466] Blade of Roses

https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/188plst/466_blade_of_roses/

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Thank you in advance for any feedback!