[4551] Harvest Blessing (Reuploaded)

Hello, reuploaded this due to lacking enough critiques.

After a lot of rewrites, editing, and cutting 40% of the word count, I'm resubmitting the whole of Harvest blessing for critique again.

Enjoy

If you want to compare it to the first time I submitted it to this subreddit

Sections 1-2 Sections 3-4

Critiques:

3103 + 2541 + 2827 + 1591 = 10,062