[2796] Dystopia/Fiction

Hi All! This is my first post so I hope I am doing this right. I am seeking review of the first chapter of my very first novel. I don't have a title yet, but here is an off the cuff one sentence summary:

Samantha Grey is forced to change her identity and confront her femininity in order to survive in a world that seeks to silence women.

Also apologies if the formatting is strange I copied it over from scrivener.

Chapter 1

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