Fever

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Alright so this one honestly sounds pretty cliche and has probably been overused by now, but it's one of the first pieces I wrote and figured I should share it anyway.

I've got a real passion,
for stringing words in a certain fashion.
My words be crackin',
like a whip thats lashin'.
And yeah I know -
My words don't scream like eminem,
but that aint gonna stop me from screamin' em.
I'll make your head explode,
I'll tell you shit you ain't never been told.
So hold onto your seat, dont let your brain implode.
Just let it flow,
I swear I'm not your foe.
I'm tryna wake us up man, can't you see?
We're slavin' away, we're not really free.
We're just a cogs in a corporate machine,
whose only interest is making more green.
They've got us on the edge with drama and suspense,
cramming our heads with bullshit and nonsense.
Life is full of things that we have never seen,
yet we'd rather sit at home and watch Kim K. on the TV screen.
We should all be going, "cut the feed,
you're making my goddamn eyes bleed!"
I mean c'mon, are we serious?
Is her life really that important to us?
I'm curious,
what is it she can really do?
It should make us sick,
that she's famous just for sucking Ray J's dick.
For heavens sake,
is that all it takes?
We live in an era,
where we know more about Justin Beiber,
than we know about their own country's leader.
And if we dont wake up soon,
it won't be long before we all catch the fever.

More by me:
Ghost of Despair
Insidious Incarceration
Unknown Known
Memory Lane
Born in A Storm
Scrimmage
Addiction

My Feedback:
Lost & Found
Seasick

Posted Feb 20, 2016, 9:32 AM UTC · edited

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