Kiss Me Like This
##Kiss Me Like This
Kiss me like a stranger
hesitant and questioning
is this okay
shock of hair between your eyes
can I – may I
feathering like fumbled rain
should I stop or
Kiss me like a
brash illicit paramour
no, we can't, we
hurried glances, stolen time
feels so right it
secretly in corridors
we'll get caught for
Kiss me like
rough, behind the laundromat
I need you so
torrid, needful, calloused hands
fuck! you drive me
poolside at a cheap motel
be quick, love, be
Kiss me
like you kiss her
##more aniLana:
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Unpsalm Trilogy: Unpsalm 1:1-19 Unpsalm 2:1-15 and Unpsalm 3:1-35
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Author's Note: this is a rough-edit draft. That means that, although it's been through the Brutal Edit Machine™ once or twice, the final result is still very much in flux. I'm putting this out there more in the hopes that others can help workshop the basic premise of the idea, and give me some feedback on whether the central conceit is worth exploring further. It is not intended to be the final, cut-in-granite, unchangeable fixture of words that I usually present. With that in mind, thank you for reading, and offering your commentary.
Posted Sep 5, 2016, 11:43 PM UTC · edited