[4,339] Fevre Dream Episode 1: A Meeting at Midnight
One of my favorite novels is Fevre Dream, by George R. R. Martin. I've read it cover to cover and listened to it on Audiobook many times, and it's definitely one of my favorites. For years now, I've dreamed-fevrishly, you might say-about writing a screenplay for an animated TV series adaptation of the book. I finally put pen to paper and made a first draft of the first episode.
I am not very familiar with screenplays. I did some research, but didn't focus too much on getting the lingo and form correct for this draft; I just wanted to get the idea down and shaped. That being said, if you are more familiar with screenplays please tell me all the many things I'm doing wrong! I need to learn sometime.
I'd love feedback on:
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Whether the body language of the characters is conveyed well enough
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Whether you think their personality/vibe would translate well to the screen
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What vibes do each of the main characters give you in this episode? Are they sympathetic, likeable, believable?
Critiques:
[2,734 Darkness, Drudgery, and Death] (https://old.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/s60adm/2734_darkness_drudgery_and_death/htmypxz/)
Posted Jan 22, 2022, 2:21 AM UTC · edited