DMC_Writing

So, in the gothic romance / horror novel I’m writing, there are two main characters who fall in love and in the near future, one finds (actually, hears but cant do anything about it as she’s suddenly locked in a nearby room) the other having been scratched to death and her eyes gouged out. The signs of this happening were all there, whether it be the scratching sounds that echoed throughout the night or them waking up with light little scratches on their bodies, but this death is horrific.

In seeing such a horrific death happen to the one they love, what would someone’s immediate reaction to this be? I know that in the long term this character will start to descend into madness after buryi

I’m a first-time author and, after 6 months and 66k words, I’ve finally finished the first draft of my novel! I’m so happy, I can’t believe this crucial step is finally done.

Now I’m onto the second draft and edits :)

Character Basics

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Full Name: Redcloak

Race/Ethnic Group: Caucasian (paler than most)

Class/Occupation: Leader of the planet of Yoselsa and of the Revolution against Voltor

Character Nature: Fantasy novel that I'm writing

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Character Details

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Gender: Male

Age: Insignificant but looks to be around 25-30

Facial Features: Red hair and eyes with a cleverly-built face like that of a scholar

Distinguishing Marks: Slight scar going across his left cheekbone area

Significant item: A glowing red sword that has a hilt that looks like silver; the blade itself is built like a chokuto sword.

Body Type: Slight figure who is around aver

My heart aches a thousand sorrows,

As I put your photo down.

It's as if all I am is hollow,

Cold and buried in the ground.

All I see is your pretty face,

As I stare into the stars.

All I feel is all this pain,

As I try to heal these scars.

My love is only unrequited,

It passes and then it's gone.

I love you but your love's forbidden

Love was all I'd ever owned.

I guess it's best to have loved and lost,

Than to have never loved at all.

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