[2010] A Man Well-Hanged
**** BEGIN EDIT: I've posted a second draft here: https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/1417p66/3010_a_man_wellhanged_d_2/
You are still welcome to critique this first draft if you like as all criticism is appreciated, but there is more meat to the second draft for you to dig your destructive teeth into.
END EDIT *****
The first chapter of a silly fantasy story about an alchemist and sorcerer who can only use magic when drunk. It's not much, but I've been enjoying myself learning to critique, so I thought it was only fair to give you all a shot at my contribution.
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ijK7tVZ7WLnFCd0b3w7BLo0z9qWPHp3TEHkaY8mabrU/edit?usp=sharing
Critses (I know these are all short but I prefer to do lots of shorter critiques that focus on things that I feel are most helpful. I think there are some longer ones further up my post history but I wondered if these earlier contributions might count for something before they expire. If you want, I can track down the beefiest crit posted more recently or expand one to standard format):
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/117gd3n/2785_villainess_pt1/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11cp5xm/2313_antwerps_island_ch_1/
https://www.reddit.com/r/DestructiveReaders/comments/11d2b18/2287_untitled_indulgence/
Posted Jun 2, 2023, 5:33 PM UTC · edited