garbage-guy

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r/OCPoetry•

our bedroom walls fill with

stomach-aching laughter

your feet dance mid-air

as you lay in our covers

you talk sincerely and

you listen carefully

to the sweet voice

on your phone

as I sit outside

hollow and

forgotten

Edit: I realize the poem may have been ambiguous or misinterpreted, but I did enjoy reading your comments. I suppose we all live different lives when it comes to ambiguity.

For those who wish to know, the poem is about someone who is sitting out of sight with their dog as they listen to their significant other intimately engaged on the phone with another person. No matter what phone conversation is discussed, at the end of the day, the dog sits with the someone and h

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