Trazaren

The ceiling is crumbling

dramatically falling down

I'm below the chandelier,

a standing hound

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I am so pleased

I trained my eyes

to endure the debris

and see the skies . .

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Usually I only find beauties of the night here, which grown spontaneous in my village. I'm in Southern Sicily.

Is it better to drown

or is it better to live?

Should I take off my crown

or should I just compete?

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I'll be "fallen down"

I'll devour my meat,

quietly leave this town

sliding through the pit.

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I tried spraying a solution of hydrogen peroxide, I tried with a red vinegar trap. I'm killing them with bare hands but there are always like 10 gnats crawling in the soil and flying around. Next thing I am going to do is letting the soil dry for like a week and see if they disappear. I'm scared they could damage my rhizomes since I planted the near the surface.

Little goblin

running on a path of shiny pebbles.

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hold your sack tight

to keep it heavy

to keep you safe

to keep you alive.

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But since they say

The future is now

You should just stop,

lie down.

Pick up a shiny little pebble,

look at it closely,

let your eyes

be a mirror for your brain,

right now.

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Or keep searching,

running and saving.

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it's up to you.

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but remember:

in the end you will be

your infinite moments.

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Hey, you're back, Hole.

You're a black hole.

When I look at my back hole,

I see it...

bleah, coal!

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