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Astronaut Confessions

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Guess who rented

The brightest star

If only my rocketship

Could go that far

I'm out of fuel

It's out of reach

The atmosphere

I try to breach

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Time for takeoff?

Where's my mind?

Got some fuel?

I've fallen behind

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Installing upgrades

One by one

Without you here

It ain't no fun

Installing upgrade

Inner voices

Upgrade failed

Too many choices

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I leave the milky way

Where's my mind?

I'm going too fast yet

I've fallen behind

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One day I'll get there

Just you wait

I'm discharging all

The excess weight

I'll rearrange here

And we'll go far

Just trust in me

My shining star

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Slice and dice

Neat and nice

Broken dreams

Are only streams

Fry it up real good

In the neighbourhood

I'll sleep alright

You just got bright

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The amethyst

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An amethyst

So beautiful

In shades of red

And in blue

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Reflects

In the light

So vividly

And so true

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It's true brilliance

Could make you ignite

Bask in the light

You violet delight

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Don't roll the dice

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Upon plastic ideals

My land has been laid

For young and rich to take

What poor and old has paid

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So is peace what we want?

Not at any price

Don't be so sure

Don't roll the dice

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With peace comes the victorious

The men who fought for an ideal

We can rise and fall like empires

Don't forget it

Don't you kneel

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So is war what we want?

Not at any price

Don't be so sure

Don't roll the dice

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With peace comes the silence

Things are settled underhand

People and countries shattered

So don't wait

Dare to demand

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So is love what we want?

Wouldn't that be nice?

Don't be so sure

Don't roll the dice

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End of the line

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Between pleasure and pain

Walking the fine line

Dancing in the freezing rain

Wishing for sunshine

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Knowing that tough times

Require a tough heart

Knows where one line ends

Another one may start

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With heart and mind

In their place

Walk proud and find

A feral grace

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The Diamond's Reflection

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Deep inside, there's a precious gem

But don't cut a diamond in the dark

It might shatter, unleashing mayhem

So bring it outside and let it spark

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Refining a diamond can take it's time

Some of them rough by sorrow or crimes

Sharpened they're all so very sublime

No diamond is flawless, nor their climes

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Find your own before helping another

For it's not true love without affection

Sharpen and shine, sister and brother

No diamond shines truly without reflection

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Snake charmer

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I caught a viper in it's nest

I make sure I do what's best

Spitting and thrashing as it may

A viper needs the light of day

I could skin you

Little viper

But I left you a clue

You must decipher

Shed your own skin

If it will shine brighter

But move on in life

For you are a fighter

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Eternal Discord

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In the caverns below

And the groves above

May your hearts grow

And release your love

No diamond shines truly

Without reflection

Sharpen and shine

In a new direction

Strive for, but don't expect perfection

Together as one

Through affection

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