[1421] Fight Scene from Blood Summer

Okay so it's Fight Scene Week and I finished cleaning this up today, so I wanted to find out if it works according to all the ways that fight scenes should work. I tried.

Fight Scene from Blood Summer, my wip. 70k and counting! I'm so slow!

There's nothing NSFW here apart from blood and violence.

The scene is from just before the midpoint, so there's a bunch of worldbuilding already done. Anything confusing, feel free to point out.

Brief recap - Cameron is a vampire hunter. Luca is a vampire. Star-crossed ex-lovers. There's two types of vamps - redbloods, nasty and contagious, and bluebloods, like regular people, almost.

Also I prefer comments and line edits here in Reddit rather than on the doc. I don't work in Gdocs except for posting stuff.

Have at it!

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